Throughout book one,
Some stat blocks and descriptions seem to be repeated, and the character comes up several times (e.g. the royal family, Kasiyl, hawk warriors, etc.
Is it worth moving these into an NPC chapter at the end to avoid repetition and to keep all of each characters information in one place?
Similarly, might it be worth moving the treasure ship into book three? BTW, I find it extremely hard to believe that the imperials would refer to a ship of this sort by a name as... crude as a "treasure ship". Surely a culture like that would refer to it as a "High Security Transport" or "Secure Freighter" or similar?