EDG said:
Just a suggestion, but you could try being more constructive with the criticism rather than just saying "this is crap".
I have said a few things on COTI but we know that's not for you so, you asked for it :wink:
Field Artillery. A bit of a specialised subject for me I know but even if I didn't have years of experience in that field I'd know that an AT gun is not known as a howitzer at early tech levels, that is any gun designed for high angle fire (not just parabolic fire) which seems to be what is called a Frag Cannon

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, damages are comparable and mysteriously the Frag Cannon seems to have a lower range than the direct firing AT Gun. The Frag Gun is described as using parabolic fire to bring an airburst round on top of troops. Not very flexible, hardly King of the Battlefield with Smoke, High Explosive, Illumination, Nuclear, Terminally Guided, Chemical or Bomblet Rounds; with timed, proximity, delayed or impact fusing. In fact the airburst round apparently works out how it detonates by its descent ("falling") velocity despite most high angle rounds achieving a terminal velocity long before they hit the ground. In fact even in WW1 an airburst could be achieved with a simple mechanical timed fuse though a proximity radar fuse is as likely today.
Mortars firing energy balls, a little bizarre but I can deal with it.
Tent Barracks, a shelter taking up to six man hours to construct. You could dig a hole out and revet it quicker.
The MagRail Guns trump everything in their class. Must be the authors pet weapon firing a devestating barage of spinning disks. Innacurate and having cruddy penetrative effects, looks good on a video game but as a weapon nope, and certainly not the best personal weapon available.
Battledress, a well defined and illustrated Traveller trope. The ultimate in personal armour seems to be morphing into Armageddon 2089 Mecha. We now have Artillery Battledress, personal armour that have their arms replaced with field artillery pieces. Fine if you want mecha, give us mecha, but trying to imagine a 2m suit of powered armour toting a 4m artillery (and that isn't that big for a field gun) barrel as its right arm is a bit laughable. Or perhaps the 100rd internal magazine for the heavy caliber shells. Just call them Mecha.
It's late and a fox has just gotten into my chickens so I'll finish this tomorrow.