Mount Salbarii
This is the part that so far I have had the most trouble with.
1) There are various references to climbing, but there is no statement of difficulty.
This segment of the climb is ... not unduly difficult for a Traveller with Athletics skills.
Great! So what's the difficulty level? Average? Routine? "Unduly Difficult" is not in the list of difficulty levels, and even if it was, all we know is the climb isn't it.
Also, which athletics speciality and which stat to use?
This happens several times in this chapter. Needs alignment with the current rules.
2) Altitude sickness & Breathing Gear. All this talk of high altitude and thin atmosphere is great, but what if they are wearing Respirators, Breather Masks or Vacc Suits? The first thing the Travellers did when they heard Walston has a thin atmosphere is shove their TL10 Breather masks up their noses. The adventure seems to assume the PCs have no air supply and no indication what to do they are prepared. These things are so small and cheap, I can't imagine a group not having them. The text for a rebreather states:
This rebreather concentrates inhaled oxygen, allowing a Traveller to breath in worlds with a thin atmosphere.
The adventure really needs to tell us how the altitude and the breather interact. Also, what if they climb in their vacc suits? No altitude sickness but harder climbing?
Maybe since the atmosphere is thin, then the travellers need a breather no matter what and the assumption is that they have one. In that case, please state it.
3) The frequent END checks for altitude sickness. On the good side, the difficulty levels are clearly sated. On the bad side, there are too many of them and they get too difficult, too fast. Early on, there is a way to avoid the rolls by taking things easy. The later rolls should also be easier or avoidable under the same circumstances. I ended up giving them a boon because they were taking it easy.
4) The whole thing seemed like too much of the same thing. Something in there to break up the climbing and hiking and END checks would make it more interesting. I say this totally in hindsight - I did not get it from reading it in advance. Something in there to break it up... Not sure what without changing the whole nature of the world of Walston.
5) I have pointed the out before, but to keep it all in one place, the bookmark in the PDF lists this chapter as "Mount Salbar II" instead of "Mount Salbarii".
The Travellers did get up. They had plenty of gear to help them out, but not sure if it should have helped them less or more.
Next up: In The Crater. We started this yesterday, but barely. It got late and we called it a night. So the full report on this will have to wait until we can finish this up in a week or two or three.