EldritchFire
Mongoose
I'm hoping others will use this thread to list all the mistakes they find and questions/clarifications they require.
Introduction
1: New Rules
2: Vehicle Design
3: Core Chassis
4: Armour
5: Weapons
While not specific to any section, there is no mention of how to do 'hand-held' weapons for giant robots/mecha. Most Gundam-sized giant robots carry weapons in-hand in addition to integrated weapon systems, and I think it would be a great idea to include rules/guidelines for how to do that.
6: Customisation
7: Bio-Tech
8: Drones
Introduction
- End of the first paragraph and beginning of the second: Vehicle Handbook should be italicised
- Third paragraph: Traveller Core Rulebook should be italicised
1: New Rules
- Sloppy Controls quirk: remove forward slash (/) from the end of the first sentence (pg4)
- Faulty Sensors quirk: On 6+? you're only rolling 1D, you can't get higher than a 6 (pg4)
2: Vehicle Design
- The cost for armour is implied to increased the cost/space of the vehicle, but page 34 doesn't say it increases the cost/space, just a flat percentage of the total chassis cost
3: Core Chassis
- Can chassis options be combined? For example, open frame and rough terrain
- Unpowered vehicle tech table: do we need a 7–9 and 10+ TL? They both have the same speed
- Unpowered boat is listed at TL1, but the tech table starts at TL4 (pg19)
- Unpowered vehicle/unpowered boat/powered boat: should they have the open vehicle trait?
- Light walker: last sentence needs reworking: "…with even small models requiring a Traveller climbs into them rather than ‘wearing’ them". Should be "…with even small models requiring a Traveller to climb into them rather than ‘wearing’ them" (pg30)
4: Armour
- The full-page advert has 'see page XX'. Should be page 37 (weapon mounts) and page 43 (plasma missile rack) (pg36; thanks to ca_lazerdwarf)
5: Weapons
- Small Turret, first sentence: "…can traverse a full 360o…" Should be "…can traverse a full 360º…" (pg38)
- Anti-tank missile: "…though versions are also some times…" should be "…though versions are also sometimes…" (pg39)
- Early machinegun: 14 tons!? Only 1 space? Should be 0.25 tons (pg40)
- Earthquake bomb, heavy bomb, high-explosive bomb, & medium bomb don't have the one use trait
- Torpedo: has the description of the light laser cannon (pg43)
- Spacecraft Weapons: Turret weapons don't have a listed weight, how can we convert them? (pg44)
While not specific to any section, there is no mention of how to do 'hand-held' weapons for giant robots/mecha. Most Gundam-sized giant robots carry weapons in-hand in addition to integrated weapon systems, and I think it would be a great idea to include rules/guidelines for how to do that.
6: Customisation
- Control Systems: Is the -Cr25 a typo? I don't see why anyone would opt to save so little compared to the cost of the vehicle (pg47)
- External Power: 'Train' isn't a vehicle type. Is that supposed to be the rail rider ground vehicle option? (pg48)
- Computers: Second paragraph, first sentence there is a space before the period (pg52)
- Various options 'double their initial cost.' How does this work with multiple doubling? If I do it twice is it x4 the cost (double twice) or x3 (each upgrade costs the base price)?
- Manipulator arm: how much can they carry? What damage does it do? (pg59)
7: Bio-Tech
- Invertebrate trait should be bold (pg62)
8: Drones
- Base Station: Traveller Core Rulebook should be italicised (pg67)