Well, you asked for it: (All page references are for the PDF file, which seem to line up with the printed page numbers)
Page 3, 1st Paragraph
IS: "The Travellers choose how their characters will react..."
SHOULD BE: "The Players choose how their Travellers will react..."
(Remember: Travellers = Player Characters and Characters = NPCs by the definition in the same paragraph.)
Page 8, Characteristics, 1st Paragraph
IS: The basic characteristics for humans are
SHOULD BE: A complete sentence and a complete thought. I believe they should list the 6 characteristics, although they are listed in the Text Box on the opposite column, so maybe they just need to reference that?
Page 8, Rolling Characteristics, 2nd Paragraph
IS: For each characteristic, determine its Dice Modifier on the table opposite.
SHOULD BE: ... on the table on page 9.
Page 14, University Skills List
IS: Electronics
SHOULD BE: Electronics (any)
Page 38, Rogue Pirate
IS: Survival DEX 7+
SHOULD BE: Per page 19, it says Survival DEX 6+
(I believe is should be DEX 6+ (keeps the sum of Survival and Advancement at 12 like the others))
Page 45, Combat Implant
IS: See Chapter 99
SHOULD BE: See Page 99
Page 47, Ageing, 1st Paragraph
IS: Add the Traveller's total number of terms as a negative DM on this table;...
SHOULD BE: Use the Traveller's total number of terms as a negative DM on this table;...
("ADD" a negative seems awkward, another word like "USE" or "TAKE" would flow better.
Page 57, Skill Checks, 4th Bullet Point
IS: ... would be a Stealth pus END check.
SHOULD BE: ... would be a Stealth plus END check.
(plus not pus)
Page 58-59, Task Difficulty Example
IS: Erik (INT 9, Carouse 2) but at top of page 59 "Erik has one level of Carouse, which gives him a DM+2..."
SHOULD BE: "Erik has two levels of Carouse, which gives him a DM+2..."
Page 60, Task Chain Example, 2nd and 3rd Sentences
IS: Erik has Engineer (electronics), ... Kathya has the Sensors skill, ...
SHOULD BE: Erik has Electronics (computers), ... Kathya has the Electronics (sensors) skill, ...
(Both are specialties of Electronics now, you might want to come up with a better example that uses different skills Maybe Mechanics and Electronics (sensors)?)
Page 72, Minor Actions - Miscellaneous
IS: ... Minor Action if it does not requires his full attention, ...
SHOULD BE: ... Minor Action if it does not require his full attention, ...
(require not requires)
Page 76, Falling, 3rd Sentence
IS: A Traveller who make a successful...
SHOULD BE: A Traveller who makes a successful...
(makes not make)
Page 79, Encounter Distance, List of Modifiers:
IS: DM+2 for every 10 Hull or part of Travellers actively looking for danger +highest Recon skill.
SHOULD BE: two columns. "Travellers..." should be in the LH side of the table with "+highest..." in the RH column of the table.
Page 84, Behaviour - Hunter
IS: Hunters have Survival. INS +2
SHOULD BE: no Instinct any more. Either give them another skill or drop the "INS +2"
Page 100, Physical Characteristic Augmentation (TL11)
IS: A character's Endurance, Strength or Reflexes can be ...
SHOULD BE: A Traveller's Endurance, Strength or Dexterity can be...
(use Traveller instead of character for consistency and Dexterity instead of Reflexes)
Page 106, Software Table, Security
IS: Rating 0 requires an Average (+0), Electronics (computers) check to successfully bypass. Difficult (-2), difficulty Hard (-4) difficulty Formidable (-6) difficulty
SHOULD BE: Rating 0 requires an Average (8+) Electronics (computers) check to successfully bypass.
Difficult (10+) difficulty
Hard (12+) difficulty
Formidable (14+) difficulty
(need to use Target Numbers not DMs for Difficulty Levels and line up the Difficulty with the Security Rating vertically)
Page 113, Inside Black Background with Red Text
IS: Scientific... Surveying...
SHOULD BE: BOLD
Scientific and
Surveying
Page 114, Environment Suit (TL8)
IS: ... gloves and booth, ...
SHOULD BE: ... gloves and boots, ...
Page 120, Body Pistol
IS: ... checks to detect them to Very Hard (-4).
SHOULD BE: ... checks them to detect them are Very Hard (12+).
Page 127, Explosives, 1st Sentence, 1st Word
IS: he Explosives skill...
SHOULD BE: The Explosives skill...
Page 129, Erik's Custom Gun, Last Sentence
IS: ... the difficulty is less than Difficult (-2).
SHOULD BE: ... the difficulty is less than Difficult (10+).
Page 130, Speed Bands table, Speed Band Number
IS: Hypersonic 10
SHOULD BE: Hypersonic A
(this is TRAVELLER darn it we use hexidecimal!)
Page 133, Weapon Damage Scales, Last Sentence of the last Paragraph on this page
IS: ..., they are Persona (always listed in black), ...
SHOULD BE: ..., they are Personal (always listed in black), ...
(Personal not Persona)
More later...
