General Formatting

[DickNervous]

I've noticed that in some spots skill specialties are capitalized and others they are not. For instance, on pg. 56 (under Specialties) it says "For Engineering, this would be a choice between Jump Drive...." but when it says to write it on your sheet it says "Engineering (jump drive) 1"

I feel that the capitalization should be consistent because it just looks wrong to me. My preference is to use caps for all skills as if they were proper nouns like it was in the first book.

 

[alex_greene]

I was told that Jump, Manoeuvre and Power have to be capitalised, as do proper nouns such as the names of language such as Vilani and Zhdetl, and (I think) the cascades of Athletics, but that everything else is in lower case.

 

[CosmicGamer]

Seeing more issues with heading formatting than I can reasonably list.

For just a couple examples,
Page 14 (which has no number on the page) has a huge sub chapter header for Pre Career Education vs Careers on page 16 which seams like it should be much larger, especially as it is the same size as it's sub headings under it like Career Descriptions and Drifters and the Draft.

Aliens, page 49, seams like it should be a larger header or else the sub category headers for Aslan and Vargr should be smaller.

Like I said, there are more issues with heading formatting and someone should take a look through the whole thing for consistency.

Next,

For my two page layout, which should be similar to a printed book, the careers do not fall on the same open two pages (probably some term for this) and you have to flip back and forth. This is also an issue with the walk through on pages 10 and 11.

In some locations there is a special graphics separating text and I'm not sure why. For example on page 58 there are graphics before Calling for Task Checks and after Which Characteristic?

No page number on page 56 and it doesn't have the same blue graphics on top and bottom like most pages.