plaid_knight said:I wasn't trying to imply that Shinji was supposed to be with her forever; I was glad when he got what was coming to him in HF.
Yet I wasn't sure how to phrase what their relationship would be in game terms, and it definitely would be counted as a disadvantage in this game setting. He does act a lot like an abusive spouse (disregarding the wishes of the other partner, emotional blackmail, physical violence, etc.) so I leaned towards terming it "abusive partner". If I say "abusive partner" or "abusive spouse" and then grant extra points for it as a secret, a new Storyteller knows exactly what I am trying to get across in the text.
Abusive Sibling is close enough, I'd say. I doubt she would think of him as either a 'spouse' or 'partner'...
It's not my intention to be cruel to any of these characters; with that aside, I must discuss the events of the source material, however tragic they may be, and try to describe everything in terms so that people with no experience with the source material can pick up the book and play ... while also including rules for "jumping in" to the story with pre-existing or OC characters.
Well, so far the jumping-in mainly covers the 'it's HF, run!' type.
To give an example, in one particular fic, I followed a couple of years after UBW-Good - in which things were a little different, when it came to freeing her (and in terms of what it is she is being freed from).
You are under no obligation to use anything I tried to come up with, of course - but either way, a little more detail about how to involve her in non-HF settings might be worth considering.
Simply saying that she's a piece of the furniture doesn't do her justice, in my humble view.