vladthemad
Mongoose
On P. 17, the connections rule states that when a connection is made now, "...then you both get one extra skill roll from your current careers." Then it follows it up with "... you may gain any skill, but cannot bring a skill above Level 3 using this rule nor may you take the Jack-of-all-Trades skill."
The problem is that the skill gained now is random, and there's no statement of what to do if this random roll gives you a level above 3 or the Jack-of-all-Trades skill. Also the word "take" I highlighted in bold above implies that you're picking the skill, not rolling for it. Lastly, it doesn't bother to take into account that one of those tables you may roll on, the Personal Development table, can give you stat boosts.
I suggest adding that this extra roll can be used on any table besides Personal Development, unless the intention was to let players gain attribute increases as well as skills. I'd also suggest letting them keep Jack-of-all-Trades if they do manage to roll it. It's such a rare skill to begin with, gaining it during a connection would seem appropriate. Otherwise state that when Jack-of-all-Trades is rolled, it should be re-rolled.
The same goes for skills that you roll over level 3 during a connection. Clarify what the players should do when this happens. Is the bonus skill point lost, or should they re-roll?
Hmm, a last thought...would it be more interesting if you gained a skill/stat/whatever from the OTHER player's career tables during the connection? That could make for more diverse and interesting characters!
The problem is that the skill gained now is random, and there's no statement of what to do if this random roll gives you a level above 3 or the Jack-of-all-Trades skill. Also the word "take" I highlighted in bold above implies that you're picking the skill, not rolling for it. Lastly, it doesn't bother to take into account that one of those tables you may roll on, the Personal Development table, can give you stat boosts.
I suggest adding that this extra roll can be used on any table besides Personal Development, unless the intention was to let players gain attribute increases as well as skills. I'd also suggest letting them keep Jack-of-all-Trades if they do manage to roll it. It's such a rare skill to begin with, gaining it during a connection would seem appropriate. Otherwise state that when Jack-of-all-Trades is rolled, it should be re-rolled.
The same goes for skills that you roll over level 3 during a connection. Clarify what the players should do when this happens. Is the bonus skill point lost, or should they re-roll?
Hmm, a last thought...would it be more interesting if you gained a skill/stat/whatever from the OTHER player's career tables during the connection? That could make for more diverse and interesting characters!