thesmiths4
Banded Mongoose
Page 239: There are no bases in the Sindal Subsector? Buckman is stated as having a Naval Base in the first paragraph of the "Sindal" section on page 238.
Also, given the other comment about Allegiance that I made to the "World Creation" section, a column should be added to show the Allegiance of each world in the subsector.
Page 240: The terminology "Secure System" is, to me, a bit confusing. It almost sounds like some sort of military statement. I figured out that the usage meant, "non-red/non-yellow travel zone", but I'd change that to either not showing that designation, or showing it as a "Green Zone". Of course, that last one means that the "Green Zone" definition would have to be added back on page 235 in the "Travel Zone" section.
Also, given the other comment about Allegiance that I made to the "World Creation" section, a column should be added to show the Allegiance of each world in the subsector.
Page 240: The terminology "Secure System" is, to me, a bit confusing. It almost sounds like some sort of military statement. I figured out that the usage meant, "non-red/non-yellow travel zone", but I'd change that to either not showing that designation, or showing it as a "Green Zone". Of course, that last one means that the "Green Zone" definition would have to be added back on page 235 in the "Travel Zone" section.
