Need playtesters/critics for a Dragon Warriors adventure

[Ydars]

I have been lurking here for some time but just decided to "delurk" because I need some help.

I have re-written an adventure of Bulya's (who also posts here) for Dragon Warriors and need some playtesters and critics.

I am after opinions about this beast, which is about 29,000 words.

Please send me a personal message if you are interested in helping. Note that I am after a fairly detailed critique, especially if anyeone would like to playtest it.

regards

Ydars

 

[Ydars]

I don't just need playtesters!

Anyone who is willing to give this a read through and let me have their thoughts is encouraged to contact me.

 

[Warhippo]

I might be able to help, Ydars. I can't playtest it yet as my gaming group consists of one other guy and he's even busier than I am but I'm more than happy to read through as much as I can (if that's any help).

 

[Niki]

I don't just need playtesters!

Anyone who is willing to give this a read through and let me have their thoughts is encouraged to contact me.

Same here, Ydars. I can read it throughfully, if you like. And I can also try it.

 

[wazza]

I'd be happy to critique it. Sounds like a mammoth adventure!

 

[Ydars]

I am in the process of a major re-write, but will contact you guys who have volunteered once I finish. Thanks for your interest and watch this space.