Gruffty the Hiver
Banded Mongoose
Harrumph. Where to start...?
p. 10: Dice notation is wrong in the Mishap table - says "1d6", should be "2d6".
p. 20: as p. 10.
p. 23: as p. 10.
p. 25: "Skills and Training" table header is in the wrong font.
p. 26: Dice notation is wrong in the Mishap table - says "2D6", should be "2d6". Also the "2" in the results column is in the wrong font.
p. 29: as p. 26.
p. 31: Huge gap between the roll results column and the skills etc columns in the Skills and Training table. Also too much column space to the right in the Rank column of the Ranks and Skills table.
p. 32: as p. 26.
p. 35: *Not actually a typo but...* is the word "Result" really needed in the Friends and Favours table, when it's clearly a straight 2d6 throw table?
p. 35: "Alien Mercenary Characters", Hivers paragraph (naturally
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p. 45: as p. 35, Employer Details table.
p. 46: all tables, as p. 35.
p. 47: all tables, as p. 35.
p. 10: Dice notation is wrong in the Mishap table - says "1d6", should be "2d6".
p. 20: as p. 10.
p. 23: as p. 10.
p. 25: "Skills and Training" table header is in the wrong font.
p. 26: Dice notation is wrong in the Mishap table - says "2D6", should be "2d6". Also the "2" in the results column is in the wrong font.
p. 29: as p. 26.
p. 31: Huge gap between the roll results column and the skills etc columns in the Skills and Training table. Also too much column space to the right in the Rank column of the Ranks and Skills table.
p. 32: as p. 26.
p. 35: *Not actually a typo but...* is the word "Result" really needed in the Friends and Favours table, when it's clearly a straight 2d6 throw table?

p. 35: "Alien Mercenary Characters", Hivers paragraph (naturally

...uhm..wtf? Someone smoking something illegal when they wrote that?In Hiver society, such endeavours are looked poorly upon when not a tentacles-off policy is taken to mercenary work.

p. 45: as p. 35, Employer Details table.
p. 46: all tables, as p. 35.
p. 47: all tables, as p. 35.