duncan_disorderly
Mongoose
Got this over the weekend, and it looks mighty fine to me. Lots of background information to help you set up an "authentic enough" campaign, and a nice starting scenario to round it off.
Just one thing I spotted appears to be missing - the section on times and dates says that days don't have names other than the first and last day of the month, but there is no information about how long a month is, or what the months are called. I think, from memory (of other Japanse RPG's) it is 12 30 day months using the same names as the hours/years?
And one layout criticism - the Name and On tables are confusing because the way they are presented suggest that all the information on a line is related . In the former case it should really be one 2 column table and 2 unrelated lists, and in the latter, the information that is the same on every line would be better not in the table but jsut given once.
Just one thing I spotted appears to be missing - the section on times and dates says that days don't have names other than the first and last day of the month, but there is no information about how long a month is, or what the months are called. I think, from memory (of other Japanse RPG's) it is 12 30 day months using the same names as the hours/years?
And one layout criticism - the Name and On tables are confusing because the way they are presented suggest that all the information on a line is related . In the former case it should really be one 2 column table and 2 unrelated lists, and in the latter, the information that is the same on every line would be better not in the table but jsut given once.