There are only a few things I noticed that I could nitpick about. And when I say nitpick I mean NITPICK! Absolutely nothing critical. I'm just listing them for the record.
1) The bow isn't listed as a selectable weapon under the description of Weaponmastery. I know this is just an oversite because they often refer to the +3RN bonus within the text of the book.
2) The section number at the top corner of the page section 15 is on just says 1. Looks like a typo. Someone just missed the 5.
3) In the text of section 127 and the footnote of the accompanying illustration there is a context error. Both state "Gathered about a circular table of gleaming steel, a group of elderly men are poring over books, star charts, and astral maps" but clearly the illustration depicts a wooden table. :lol: oops!
On other thing I noticed. In this version of the book you are told to list the Silver Bow of Duadon as a special item not a weapon as in my old copy. If memory serves me right, doesn't the Grandmaster books consider it a special item? If so then this would correct that inconsistency.
