flatscan said:
You're talking of the pastiche I believe. The REH fragment is only a couple pages and doesn't get that far into the story. I've not read the pastiche, and in fact have no books with it in it. Could you sum up de Camp's take on it?
Actually, Lin Carter finished Howard's fragment. I like de Camp's take on Conan, but he wasn't the one who finished this story.
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Conan is a mercenary signed on with Turan's army. His bow marksmanship and horsemanship are indifferent, so Conan is relegated as a scrub--just one of the masses in the fight.
King Yildz has sent a force several thousand strong to Yaralet, a city that sits on the turanian steppe in the foothills of Zamora. The satrap of Yaralet, Munthassem Khan, is in open rebellion with Turan.
The story begins at the close of the battle. Conan's horse (that he received from Murilo, in the story
Rogues in the House, falls victim in a rain of arrows. Conan has little. He's dressed in a ragged loin cloth and high strapped sandals only. The only thing of value he now owns, after the death of his horse, is the ancient broadsword he wields (that taken from
The Thing in the Crypt).
The Turanians are winning the day when, from the sky, devil-shadow apparitions swoop over the battlefield and kill all, soldier of Turan and insurgent alike.
Conan watches as one of these shadow-things scoops up the Turanian commander then drops him from an unsurvivable height.
Both sides of the battle begin to route.
Conan faces one just after, but his sword passes through the phantom without seemingly damaging the thing. His sword gone, he reaches for his dagger, but in his weakened state pull the pouch from his waist that contains a curious amulet he had found the day before.
At the sight of this amulet, the demon-phantom is frightened away, and Conan, drained from the fight, drops where he stands.
He awakes on the field of dead. He hopes to rob the fallen for equipment or wealth, but he is too late. The buggers from Yaralet have already cleaned the field. He does find a new horse, though, the great black steed the Turanian general rode.
And, Conan finds girl, collapsed by the side of the lazy river Nezvaya. He's puzzled at this girl. What is she doing on the battlefield.
He wakes her and realizes she's in sad shape. She says she's a slave from the city, Yaralet, and that she knows his name is Conan. She was sent to find him.
Now more puzzled, Conan follows her into Yaralet, taking the sewers below the streets to avoid the guards. He is led to the home of her master, a man named Atalis.
Atalis, it turns out, is a conspirator. He and Prince Than have motives to unseat Munthassem Khan, but the Khan has become all powerful.
The story is that Munthassem, once loyal to Yildz, had interest in all things old. A caravan bearing an artifact that was old before Atlantis became a ruling city found its way into the Khan's possesion. This was the Hand of Nergal, a rod, ending in a demon claw, gripping a mysterious looking gem.
In truth, the Hand of Nergal possesses Munthassem, and the man is controled my a mysterious being--a demon--from a time long forgotten.
Atalis is a seer. In his crystal, he sometimes sees the future and places distant. He saw Conan pick up the amulet the barbarian had found the previous day, and he recognized it as the Heart of Tammuz. When the battle formed just outside the city, Atalis sent his servant, the beautful brythunian Hildico to fetch the cimmerian back to Atalis, for with the Heart of Tammuz had picked its champion. Tammuz and Nergal are old rivals from a time before recorded history.
Conan follows Atalis and Prince Tam through the sewers under the city to enter the Khan's stronghold. They find the throne room and the Khan, asleep, he Hand of Nergal clutched in his hand.
But, the Khan isn't really asleep. He works his magic, immobilizing all three insurrectionists.
Conan has lost.
And, it is here the slave Hildico appears from the sewer great, moves to Conan's limp form. Retrieving the amulet, she hurls it to smash into the Khan's forehead. He goes down. The amulet comes to rest on one side of Munthassem. The Hand falls to the floor on the other side.
As Conan regains consciousness but watches as two enemies, the shadow-selves of Tammuz and Nergal, blast at each other over the throne.
In the end, it is Tammuz that wins. The Heart is stronger than the Hand.
The story concludes with Prince Tam becoming Khan (assuming he sends reaffirms Yaralet's support of King Yildz in Aghrapur.
Conan leaves Yaralet to return to Turan, the general's black steed between his legs, a purse of gold on his waist, and the young Brythunian Hildico, clutching his sides, behind him.