Project Card (Updated 06-20-07) - New Card: Brute Squad

Ok...what do you guys think of this:

MarauderTrooperTest.jpg
 
Honestly, the only thing I don't like is that the logo underneath the weapons/abilities list on the back will make it very hard to read and text that overlaps it.

If you could find/create a black & white logo to go underneath the text and be watermarked/faded out it would be much more readable.

Other than that, very nice.
 
erion said:
Honestly, the only thing I don't like is that the logo underneath the weapons/abilities list on the back will make it very hard to read and text that overlaps it.

If you could find/create a black & white logo to go underneath the text and be watermarked/faded out it would be much more readable.

Other than that, very nice.

Uh, Hiromoon's logo is a watermark. Maybe it could be possible to use a more 'faded' version. I'd say print the card out first and then see how it looks.
 
BuShips said:
erion said:
Honestly, the only thing I don't like is that the logo underneath the weapons/abilities list on the back will make it very hard to read and text that overlaps it.

If you could find/create a black & white logo to go underneath the text and be watermarked/faded out it would be much more readable.

Other than that, very nice.

Uh, Hiromoon's logo is a watermark. Maybe it could be possible to use a more 'faded' version. I'd say print the card out first and then see how it looks.

Done, and it's very hard to read the black text on the dark red of the logo, even with the watermark effect.

Perhaps if it was faded out more it would look somewhat better, but I think if it was converted to B/W with the red part of the text changed to white or even a light gray it would be easier to deal with.
 
It looks better with a bigger watermark. Besides, that's a temporary card since I have to wait till wednsday to get my copy of the book.
 
Ok! I just got done with a ton of bugs today, leaving me the king tanker, the overseer, and the Queen to do, along with:

Tunnel Marker
Tunnel Entrance
Nest Entrance
Camoflauged Entrance
Bug Central








 
byram said:
what if you changed font size on just this one?

That's Areal. I'm thinking of making a seperate card for the Heavenly Mercy card to make more room, since I got a good idea for hte card.
 
byram said:
what about making it two seperate cards, one for the upgrades, one for the stats...

That's the thing, if I make a heavnly mercy card, it frees up space and I can label those little bits in there that you seem to have issues with.
 
im saying if you made all the different options one card. but i think i know what your doing, your gonna PS a red cross on the slingshot arent you....
 
you should remove the line under the MASH part, then in the brackets insert: see counterpart card. this will aloow you to have enough room to make the movement intervals more readable.
 
Just one note, on the regular slingshot card, under the ground support option, firestorm is misspelled. It says Firestrom. Just a typo, but it doesn't hurt to point it out.

These are looking awesome btw. Amazing work. I can't wait to actually use them. I just got the rules not too long ago, but I haven't had much time to actually play.
 
I just did a bunch of corrections on some cards, so gimme a sec and they'll be better.

Edit: There....now 2 choices....more normal cards, or get the customs out of the way....
 
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