(1) The placement of the forward turrets doesn’t seem right. The way they are jutting out into the main corridor seems forced. The neck itself also seems too narrow, and the corridor is only a single square (1.5m) wide. Main corridors should be two squares wide, or at least they are in other ships.
(2) The upper cargo hold seems pretty big for a patrol corvette. And the docking space for the launch doesn’t make sense because the launch can’t get in there sideways.
(3) The G-Carrier docking zone on the lower deck seems overly large, unless that was by design to allow for access. If the G-Carrier is out or the door opened you cannot move between upper and lower decks because there is no direct corridor (access is through the G-Carrier space. There are two hatches (one goes into the cargo area, again, inaccessible if open to space) and there is another directly into the engineering section (engineering should have it’s own secure access point).
(2) The upper cargo hold seems pretty big for a patrol corvette. And the docking space for the launch doesn’t make sense because the launch can’t get in there sideways.
(3) The G-Carrier docking zone on the lower deck seems overly large, unless that was by design to allow for access. If the G-Carrier is out or the door opened you cannot move between upper and lower decks because there is no direct corridor (access is through the G-Carrier space. There are two hatches (one goes into the cargo area, again, inaccessible if open to space) and there is another directly into the engineering section (engineering should have it’s own secure access point).