CordwainerFish
Emperor Mongoose
Table of contents:
* 'The Glisten-Five Sisters Region' should point to page 6, not page 8
** Also, 'Sisters' should only have one E in it
* 'Iderati' should point to page 26, not page 28
Throughout: should be Church of the Stellar Divinity
Index: every single entry I checked was wrong. You must not let the book go to press in that condition! That's the fault that makes the T5 books worthless to me.
* Also single page numbers have one leading zero; if I infer the line style correctly all page numbers should be padded to 3 digits with leading zeros as appropriate.
* Also also the entries are inconsistent as to casing: most use headline case but many do not - and some proper nouns ("Ine givar"; "Sublieutenant Khili spencer") do not have the expected caps.
* 'The Glisten-Five Sisters Region' should point to page 6, not page 8
** Also, 'Sisters' should only have one E in it
* 'Iderati' should point to page 26, not page 28
Throughout: should be Church of the Stellar Divinity
Index: every single entry I checked was wrong. You must not let the book go to press in that condition! That's the fault that makes the T5 books worthless to me.
* Also single page numbers have one leading zero; if I infer the line style correctly all page numbers should be padded to 3 digits with leading zeros as appropriate.
* Also also the entries are inconsistent as to casing: most use headline case but many do not - and some proper nouns ("Ine givar"; "Sublieutenant Khili spencer") do not have the expected caps.