Some feedback after I prepared a bit of the campaign and refereed a first session.
For the errata:
p 37: The regeneration ability of G482 is described as giving it '1D energy reserve for every point it reduces its maximum hits by'. The example that follows states that 'the creature loses 1 from its maximum hits and gains 2D energy' and consequently sums up that burning 7 hits will give 14D points. Below the example the reverse process is then again described as 1D energy will give 1 hit.
Which way was it meant? I suppose things got changed during development and test, and the example was not adapted?
And two comments regarding the contents:
In
Ancient Hunters at Egypt:
Aish Nirka, the Captain of Knowledge, has a collection of Ancients items (replica) he likes to proudly present. It is only given a vague description. As Ancients item descriptions are scarce, it would have been nice if some suggestions were given. It is a bit of work for the referee to come up with some - or at least for someone like me, who tackles the Ancients seriously for the first time
In
In Fleeting Memoriam:
Edkiku Lam has completely forgotten his family without ever encountering G482, due to the effect described in the "Worse than death" box.
Aside from the fact that, being a more of a "hard SciFi" guy I find a general whiping of memory on the mind of absent people too far fetched, even for the ancients (I can accept peoples minds constructing things afer a triggering encounter with G482, but some far reaching effect overstretches my suspension of disbelief), the effect seems to be very selective: While Edkiku is affected, his friends and Ammegash are not and remember his wife and child.
You could make up some reasoning that the effect is only on those who are emotionally very close to the victims, but phew ... I'll just change the events so that he witnessed their demise and then the "acceptable" (to my SoD

) mechanism of repression set in.
But these are nitpicks, overall I like the adventure very much so far (players just arrived on Callia and I've read/prepared play of the campaign up to the end of the Callia section.