High & Dry Typo Sweep

[MrSpaceman]

Similar to the Typo Sweep for the Core book (http://forum.mongoosepublishing.com/viewtopic.php?f=130&t=112311).

The format used in the other thread is:

Page:
Section: (section title)
Para.: (within section)
Line(s): (within paragraph)
Typo: (the text included in the PDF currently)
Correction: (the suggested new text)

 

[MrSpaceman]

Page: 2
Section: N/A
Line(s): 1
Typo: "provides Travellers a starship"
Suggestion: "provides Travellers with a starship"

Page: 2
Section: Third Imperium
Line(s): 4
Typo: "a few creatures on the world the Traveller will visit"
Suggestion: "a few creatures on the world the Travellers will visit"

...I've not read far yet...

 

[allanimal]

PDF Bookmarks all refer to Mount Salbarii as Mount Salbar II

 

[allanimal]

Page: 31
Paragraph 5
Line 2:
Typo: "and seeking away out into the crater."
Suggestion: "and seeking a way out into the crater."

 

[MongooseMatt]

All noted thus far - any more?

 

[IanBruntlett]

All noted thus far - any more?

Well I've posted this before. I've had a quick look at the Printer Friendly PDF and found my feedback hasn't been applied.

Here it is, for your convenience...
Feedback – MgT2 Traveller – High and Dry.

Page 4
* Table of information about systems. The Travel Code column is empty. Is this the same as “Travel Zones” from MgT1's p167?
* Previously mentioned table has a “Location” column that does not match up with the map on p5.

Page 5
* Title of map is District 286 – it should be District 268
* For ease of use, label the sides of the map “Coreward, Trailing” etc.
* On the map have some kind of indicator where Sword Worlds ends and District 268 starts. There is an attempt to show that border with white lines but it just doesn't look right

In general.
* From a harassed GM's point of view, labelling the maps and diagrams is a necessity.
* Be a good idea to mention that all this is happening in the Spinward Marches sector & more information can be found from the eponymous book.

 

[MongooseMatt]

Well I've posted this before. I've had a quick look at the Printer Friendly PDF and found my feedback hasn't been applied.

Had a quick check on this - apologies, it has been updated, just not in the b/w version. Very naughty, sorry.