Zorkaan said:Hi Hellebore. I wrote the sections you incriminate (the others authors of the book are not responsible for this!)... The only thing I can tell now is that I sincerely apologize. As you may not know, I'm French, and regardless of my passion for the LW Universe I have to shamefully admit I still make mistakes in English. There must have been a malfunctioning in the proof reading of the parts I wrote alone, sorry!!Hellebore said:just received my copy of this book. Whilst the depth is great, the writing in some places isn't.
I don't see much proof reading going on because there is quite a lot of bad grammar and inappropriate word use in the book and not just simple stuff. It almost reads like a poor translation in some cases:
At least, I'm happy that you appreciated the depth of the book, which, I think, uncovers many secrets of the Darklands, revealed by Joe Dever himself!!
Vincent Lazzari
No worries Vincent. As I said, I think it needed editing and proofing. If I was hired to write something in French I'd be hoping the publisher had someone that could take my terribad French and turn it into something readable.

Hellebore