The Wolf said:
@Robin: Since I wrote the Lone Wolf article, I'll take that as a compliment
I've not found time to read it properly yet, but I was just quickly scanning through for the purposes of this post. One thing that struck me is that it probably needed to be longer or a multi-part piece to allow it room for detail. I'll give you a couple of examples. In the Street of Silver bit it says, "Inside... are many interesting place to spend coin." That's fine and dandy, but what are they? Similarly, in Sundries and Stuff we have the twins and their curios, but it would have been interesting to have some example of the curios and how they obtained them. The Bath House sounds interesting, but do any interesting NPCs visit there and what's the latest gossip there?
Sorry that's a bit negative, especially given that it's based on a very casual perusal largely focused on one page, but it's that sort of detail I'm always looking for. However, it's
exactly the sort of article that appeals to me.
Regards
Robin