I guess I'm just surprised that you threw in the anti-sniper rule for Bodyguard, if you've already nerfed snipers in general. I would expect anti-sniper rules to appear separately, not on individual cards.
I haven't written my idea of the Revered Leader down, because I was going to treat them like any of the other command units. You wanted to make them into something a little different: that's cool and all, but it does leave you open to accusations of power-gaming, or micro-managing, or just plain wackiness. In the standard game, where platoon commanders are vulnerable to snipers, having a leader that isn't vulnerable is a big advantage; in your home games, where others are similarly protected, it probably doesn't make much of a difference. But you didn't mention your house rules in the intial posting, so it jumped out at a lot of people as odd.
Personally, as the only leader with a designated cohort of Bodyguards, I would expect the Revered Leader to be easier for a sniper to discern, and thus more vulnerable to sniper fire. YMM(obviously)V.