Looks good, although the location of the medical facility makes life diffi-
cult for the medic: Patients have to be transported from the airlock to the
medical facility through the entire length of the ship, which is a bit difficult
when the patient has to be transported on a stretcher, and also is slightly
dangerous in the case of an infectious disease.
This is of course no serious problem. Still, I would prefer to use the spa-
ce directly opposite the airlock (currently Ship's Locker and part of a sta-
teroom) for the medical facility, and then place the Ship's Locker between
the medical facility and the first stateroom to isolate the medical facility
a bit from the accomodations.