Yeróilra system: your comments welcome and appreciated

[paltrysum]

My write-up on the Yeróilra system, a world of the Glorious Empire in the Trojan Reach:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lM8MiCAd4c4nG5S4_L0HrnuufnHRKNNDCNEYgYnefg8/edit?usp=sharing

I intend to use this world in an upcoming adventure I'm writing and would love to get some feedback. Comments and corrections of my shamelessly hand-waving astrophysics are welcome.

 

[dragoner]

Personally for docs I prefer single column and page numbers in the upper right. Looks good though, what did you use for system details, Heaven and Earth?

 

[paltrysum]

Personally for docs I prefer single column and page numbers in the upper right. Looks good though, what did you use for system details, Heaven and Earth?

I lost my World Builder's Handbook long ago but I do have a copy of T20, which has the expanded system guidelines which I referred to. I really just made them up, though. The one guideline that made sense was that if you're going to insert companion stars in the middle of your stellar system, you should have half the adjacent zones toward the star empty, and one adjacent zone in the outer direction empty. Half would have meant one more zone, but I fudged it down to two. With the system mainworld being a vaccuum world, I figured it wouldn't matter if the companion red dwarf were a little closer.

Thanks for checking it out!