Hey, I noticed a few typos and other grey areas in the scenario, and this thread is devoted to any others that other players may find. August or some other Mongoose could step in and answer our questions, or once all the typos are in, they could correct the document.
The Shianlune Bow:
On page 49, it says that its critical range is initially 19-20, yet on page 50, under "Deadly Shot", it says that the bow becomes 19-20. Which one is right?
The index at the beginning lists the same chapter twice in Act III.
Page 8 typo:
"as long as they eventually deliver the cloak to Toran, Geyron or the Brotherhood will be able to safely recover the document."
Page 9 typo:
"looks to have been written in the same handwriting, but in a rushed and ."
Page 10 typo:
"There are seldom more than 50 of them iin existence at any one time"
Page 11 typos:
"No Perception checks are needed to notices the gory sight
– the horse was attacked and killed on the road and the
Player Characters will have not trouble noticing this."
Page 13 typo:
"They may also [meet?] further up the road heading toward Toran."
Page 24 typo:
"Regardless of
how they find it, a night in the Boar of Pony will cost 1 Gold Crown for each hero."
Page 25 typo:
"Anyone acting towards Kierra in anything but a pleasant fashion will rapidly be warned by Colman or Tianna to back off."
Page 26 typos:
"Such sales, and what merchandise might be available, is entirely up the Games Master."
"If the heroes were unpleasant at the gate, or become too friendly with Kierra or Mikel, they will earn his distrust (and suffer a –2 penalty to Charisma-based checks with Barnet). Any Player Character who assaulted his guards or hurt Kierra are in for a very tough time in Toran,[...]"
Page 28 mistake:
The description of the sage Geroyn is the same as that of Ayrendon.
There's a missing value for Geroyn's concentration skill bonus:
"Skills: Appraise +9, Bluff +5, Concentration +X, Diplomacy
+5, Gather Information +8,[...]"
Page 30 typos:
"He also has a of magical gift to bestow."
"He will present the it to the Player Characters, explaining that its magic will be permanently lost after three uses."
Page 32 typos:
"A thorough examination of the mess will and a successful DC 12 Heal check, will also verify that the deer was slain by a creature with claws like those used on Andus and his horse."
"The dream itself is which is describing the funeral of the deceased Suukon hero."
Page 38 typo:
"Another jerkily moves forwards and then collapses into a pile of duty bones."
Page 39 typo:
"the Suukon hero is truly resting in piece and will not assault them even for the crime of grave robbing."
Page 41 "now" repeated:
"The Hound is out there and it has no idea that now, it is now the hunted."
Page 42 typo:
"It is still a very dangerous creature and no matter how powerful the arms these new weapons are, their wielders are still the same relatively fragile heroes they were before they acquired them."
Page 45:
The text for the Harrowing Hound is a direct copy and paste from the previous scene. This part needs to be changed because the Hound is described as having just howled:
"The Hound does not have the inclination to use its extraordinary howl ability in this combat."
Page 50 typo:
"A particular creature is only every susceptible to this instant death ability once in its existence..."
That's it for now, I'll add more as I find them.
The Shianlune Bow:
On page 49, it says that its critical range is initially 19-20, yet on page 50, under "Deadly Shot", it says that the bow becomes 19-20. Which one is right?
The index at the beginning lists the same chapter twice in Act III.
Page 8 typo:
"as long as they eventually deliver the cloak to Toran, Geyron or the Brotherhood will be able to safely recover the document."
Page 9 typo:
"looks to have been written in the same handwriting, but in a rushed and ."
Page 10 typo:
"There are seldom more than 50 of them iin existence at any one time"
Page 11 typos:
"No Perception checks are needed to notices the gory sight
– the horse was attacked and killed on the road and the
Player Characters will have not trouble noticing this."
Page 13 typo:
"They may also [meet?] further up the road heading toward Toran."
Page 24 typo:
"Regardless of
how they find it, a night in the Boar of Pony will cost 1 Gold Crown for each hero."
Page 25 typo:
"Anyone acting towards Kierra in anything but a pleasant fashion will rapidly be warned by Colman or Tianna to back off."
Page 26 typos:
"Such sales, and what merchandise might be available, is entirely up the Games Master."
"If the heroes were unpleasant at the gate, or become too friendly with Kierra or Mikel, they will earn his distrust (and suffer a –2 penalty to Charisma-based checks with Barnet). Any Player Character who assaulted his guards or hurt Kierra are in for a very tough time in Toran,[...]"
Page 28 mistake:
The description of the sage Geroyn is the same as that of Ayrendon.
There's a missing value for Geroyn's concentration skill bonus:
"Skills: Appraise +9, Bluff +5, Concentration +X, Diplomacy
+5, Gather Information +8,[...]"
Page 30 typos:
"He also has a of magical gift to bestow."
"He will present the it to the Player Characters, explaining that its magic will be permanently lost after three uses."
Page 32 typos:
"A thorough examination of the mess will and a successful DC 12 Heal check, will also verify that the deer was slain by a creature with claws like those used on Andus and his horse."
"The dream itself is which is describing the funeral of the deceased Suukon hero."
Page 38 typo:
"Another jerkily moves forwards and then collapses into a pile of duty bones."
Page 39 typo:
"the Suukon hero is truly resting in piece and will not assault them even for the crime of grave robbing."
Page 41 "now" repeated:
"The Hound is out there and it has no idea that now, it is now the hunted."
Page 42 typo:
"It is still a very dangerous creature and no matter how powerful the arms these new weapons are, their wielders are still the same relatively fragile heroes they were before they acquired them."
Page 45:
The text for the Harrowing Hound is a direct copy and paste from the previous scene. This part needs to be changed because the Hound is described as having just howled:
"The Hound does not have the inclination to use its extraordinary howl ability in this combat."
Page 50 typo:
"A particular creature is only every susceptible to this instant death ability once in its existence..."
That's it for now, I'll add more as I find them.
